This is Michael. Good job. Here are some mistakes you have made.
Slide 2: change serie to series change activitie to activities change prepareting to preparing
Slide 4: change movility to mobility Slide 4 seems to be good but I have trouble reading it. Make the words bigger and/or change it to an easier to read color.
Slide 5: ...consists in ´´doing´´ some ´´exercises to´´ bet your muscles ´´prepared.´´ In this part your heart ´´starts´´ beating faster. This sends more blood...
Slide 6: gonna is not a word. It is slang. Change it to ´´going to.´´
Double check your game descriptions. Read it out loud to see if it sounds correct. There are some grammar errors in there.
This is Michael. Good job. Here are some mistakes you have made.
ResponderEliminarSlide 2:
change serie to series
change activitie to activities
change prepareting to preparing
Slide 4:
change movility to mobility
Slide 4 seems to be good but I have trouble reading it. Make the words bigger and/or change it to an easier to read color.
Slide 5:
...consists in ´´doing´´ some ´´exercises to´´ bet your muscles ´´prepared.´´
In this part your heart ´´starts´´ beating faster. This sends more blood...
Slide 6:
gonna is not a word. It is slang. Change it to ´´going to.´´
Double check your game descriptions. Read it out loud to see if it sounds correct. There are some grammar errors in there.